From a65b98a69ea8f4cb629d5b4cb3b5d8848098df5d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Eric Andersen <andersen@codepoet.org>
Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2004 17:15:53 +0000
Subject: Fix grammar and spelling

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 <ul>
 
-    <li> <b>20 Aprol 2004, uClibc 0.9.26 Debian uwoody</b>
+    <li> <b>20 April 2004, uClibc 0.9.26 based Debian uwoody</b>
     <br>
 
     CodePoet Consulting (i.e. Erik) is pleased to announce the immediate
-    availability of an x86 port of Debian woody.  This was originally announced
-    a couple of months ago, but has been updated a few times since to correct
-    a few problems.  If you want an easy way to start building your own uClibc
-    based applications, this is it.  Even supports building your own packages
-    using 'apt-get'.  You can find Erik's uwoody distribution
-    <a href="http://www.uclibc.org/dists/">uwoody distribution here</a>,
-    If you think this is the coolest thing since the invention of water, feel
-    free to <a href="http://uclibc.org/FAQ.html#support">let him know</a>
+    availability of an x86 port of Debian woody compiled with uClibc 0.9.26.
+    This was originally announced a couple of months ago, but has been updated
+    a few times since to correct several small problems.  If you want an easy
+    way to start building your own uClibc based applications, this is it.  This
+    even supports building your own packages using 'apt-get', and using
+    'apt-get' to install already compiled packages from uclibc.org.  You can
+    find Erik's uwoody distribution <a
+    href="http://www.uclibc.org/dists/">uwoody distribution here</a>, If you
+    think this is the coolest thing since the invention of water, feel free to
+    <a href="http://uclibc.org/FAQ.html#support">let us know</a>.
 
 
     <p>
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